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High Scool Ruins Love by !famouspornstar:iconfamouspornstar:



Your words cut deep
i can't even begin to express
the rising feelinf of pain
climbing up in my chest
you apologize when no one's looking
but that hurts even worse
bcuase i fall for it every time
words heard always rehearsed
yet wheneveryone's around
you all laugh and stare
you kick me when i'm down
no room in your heart for care
i loved you so mch
you said you'd always be there
yet you were the first to leave
broke my heart, how could you dare
you say awful mean things
yet i always come crawling back
you used me for your pleasure
to your evilness a blind eye did turn
until i finally realized
my respect you do not deserve
i keep my words of tue love
and when i say it it's true
but how long do you expect me to withstand
the torture you put me through
©2004-2009 !famouspornstar
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about a guy who i loved

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:iconrocker-trancer-poet:
OMG! I'm really feeling this poem--I went through something like this fairly recently.

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"The only excuse for making a useless thing is that one admires it intensely." Oscar Wilde

"You're half a world away
but in my mind I whisper every single word you say
And before you sleep at night
you pray to me--your singing satellite."
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very good poem. Need a lot of work on your spelling. Hope you don't take offence to this comment because you write awesome but the whole point of being a writer means learning how to spell. And being 17.... you should know. anyways good job on the poem. Nice use of emotion...... :)

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haha i know it's this comp i type really fast and it's an old computer so it skips letters because i type too fast o you hve to bang the keys real hard tp get it to type...no offense taken...thanks a lot though i appreciate the comment

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:iconfamouspornstar:
thanks yea i think everyone has been through the same thing!!! thanks for the comment!!

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:iconswordexpert:
you are a good writer anyways. haha those old keyboards are seriously annoying haha. Anyways no problem.. I love leaving comments. Check out my work as well if you wish ;) haha

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yes of course, i'mwatching you!!!

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Great Poem! U uexpress your feelings so well! :hug:

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